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WG chair nits on draft-ietf-secsh-auth-kbdinteract-04.txt
Okay, it's been impressed on me by the powers that be that wg chairs
should do more thorough drafts review.
This is the first of a series.
- Bill
1) normative/informative reference split.
look like [PAM] is informative; everything else is normative.
[rfc-2279] is not explicitly referenced anywhere by reference
id, but is normative (for encoding of various forms here and
there).
2) security considerations.
i can't find one. this is a bad thing. let's add this to the
"needs security considerations rewrite" pile.
once again, see draft-iab-sec-cons-03.txt for guidelines on
writing one.
3) iana considerations.
"protocol constants" should turn into "iana considerations".
also an explicit allocation of the userauth type
"keyboard-interactive" needs to be listed.
there may be other constants in the document which should be
listed here but I can't find them.
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