Re: WG Last Call: draft-ietf-secsh-break-03.txt

[der Mouse <mouse%Rodents.Montreal.QC.CA@localhost>]

> This message marks the start of a two-week working group Last Call on
> draft-ietf-secsh-break-03.txt for publication as a Proposed Standard.

I have some copy-edit comments on it.  Indented lines are quotes from
break-03; the following non-indented lines are fixes I would like to
see made.

Even if none of these chagnes are made, I would like to see this
document advance.

   the attached terminal to be capable of send a BREAK signal.

s/send/sending/

   requirement.  If BREAK duration request of less than 500ms, is

s/requirement/suggestion/
s/ request / /
s/,//

   facility MAY be implemented configurable or a per port or per server

s/ted con/ted as con/
s/per /per-/g

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