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WG Chair Nits on draft-ietf-secsh-gsskeyex-09.txt



Going through the manual part of http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html I
found a few nits:

Abstract:
	There are multiple references in the abstract.  These need to be
	removed so the abstract can be stand-alone.

	Also, the reference-to-2119 text should not appear in the Abstract. 
	(Usually it goes in immediately after the Introduction)

Security Considerations section: 
	"SSH_MSG_KEXGEE_CONTINUE" looks like a typo.

You don't need to rev the draft right now as I'm about to start a Last
Call.
 
						- Bill











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