Re: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-secsh-publickeyfile-09.txt

[der Mouse <mouse%Rodents.Montreal.QC.CA@localhost>]

> 	Filename	: draft-ietf-secsh-publickeyfile-09.txt

Proofreader-style comments, for what they're worth:

Line 296:
   This field is used to store the login-name that the key was generated
s/-/ /

Line 313
   existing implementations fail if these quotation marks are omitted
s/$/./

Line 324:
   New headers that are of the from "x-" are considered experimental,
s/from/form/

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   solely one it's 2nd-preimage resistance, not on it's collision-
s/one/on/
s/it's/its/g
s/collision-/collision/

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