> Please find the new version of the draft and let us know if you have
> more comments.
The line break inside "I/O" in the abstract looks a bit broken.
Other than that I see nothing wrong with it offhand - well, except for
the brokenness inherent in using UTF-8 at all, which strikes me as out
of scope for the draft.
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