[pkgsrc/trunk]: pkgsrc/sysutils/dmesg2gif/files Reword an unclear sentence. ...

[cube <cube%pkgsrc.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/pkgsrc/rev/66b27eb74900
branches:  trunk
changeset: 463459:66b27eb74900
user:      cube <cube%pkgsrc.org@localhost>
date:      Tue Nov 11 22:15:01 2003 +0000

description:
Reword an unclear sentence.  With the appreciated help of Soren Jacobsen.

diffstat:

 sysutils/dmesg2gif/files/dmesg2gif.1 |  12 ++++++------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diffs (35 lines):

diff -r cb0392b4fc36 -r 66b27eb74900 sysutils/dmesg2gif/files/dmesg2gif.1
--- a/sysutils/dmesg2gif/files/dmesg2gif.1      Tue Nov 11 21:22:51 2003 +0000
+++ b/sysutils/dmesg2gif/files/dmesg2gif.1      Tue Nov 11 22:15:01 2003 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: dmesg2gif.1,v 1.3 2003/11/03 10:19:29 cube Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: dmesg2gif.1,v 1.4 2003/11/11 22:15:01 cube Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 2003, The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
 .\" ARISING IN ANY WAY OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE
 .\" POSSIBILITY OF SUCH DAMAGE.
 .\"
-.Dd November 2, 2003
+.Dd November 11, 2003
 .Dt DMESG2GIF 1
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
@@ -51,12 +51,12 @@
 .Sh FILES
 .Bl -tag -width /var/run/dmesg.boot
 .It Pa /var/run/dmesg.boot
-The output of
+The initial output of
 .Xr dmesg 8
-is saved in that file directly after the boot.
-Kernel messages may overwrite it later on.
+is saved in this file immediately after booting.
+These messages may later be overwritten by the kernel.
 .El
 .Sh SEE ALSO
-.Xr dmesg 1 ,
+.Xr dmesg 8 ,
 .Xr dot 1 ,
 .Xr xv 1