[pkgsrc/trunk]: pkgsrc/doc/guide/files Change the grammar of the esound parag...

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details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/pkgsrc/rev/db836dc02059
branches:  trunk
changeset: 502021:db836dc02059
user:      tv <tv%pkgsrc.org@localhost>
date:      Tue Nov 01 17:19:09 2005 +0000

description:
Change the grammar of the esound paragraph slightly so it's easier to read.

diffstat:

 doc/guide/files/platforms.xml |  8 ++++----
 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diffs (25 lines):

diff -r 0fe7b9410af5 -r db836dc02059 doc/guide/files/platforms.xml
--- a/doc/guide/files/platforms.xml     Tue Nov 01 17:15:25 2005 +0000
+++ b/doc/guide/files/platforms.xml     Tue Nov 01 17:19:09 2005 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: platforms.xml,v 1.18 2005/11/01 17:14:04 tv Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: platforms.xml,v 1.19 2005/11/01 17:19:09 tv Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="platforms">
   <title>Using pkgsrc on systems other than &os;</title>
@@ -346,12 +346,12 @@
            intensive applications may require a faster-than-expected CPU.</para></listitem>
 
          <listitem><emphasis role="strong">Audio:</emphasis>
-           <para>Interix has no native support for audio output.  To provide audio
+           <para>Interix has no native support for audio output.  For audio
            support, pkgsrc uses the <command>esound</command> client/server
            audio system on Interix.  Unlike on most platforms, the
            <filename role="pkg">audio/esound</filename> package does
-           <emphasis>not</emphasis> contain the <command>esound</command>
-           server component.  To output audio, the
+           <emphasis>not</emphasis> contain the <command>esd</command>
+           server component.  To output audio via an Interix host, the
            <filename role="pkg">emulators/cygwin_esound</filename> package
            must also be installed.</para></listitem>