[pkgsrc/trunk]: pkgsrc/www/blur6ex English improvements.

[wiz <wiz%pkgsrc.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/pkgsrc/rev/21b325f20ea1
branches:  trunk
changeset: 489196:21b325f20ea1
user:      wiz <wiz%pkgsrc.org@localhost>
date:      Fri Feb 18 14:00:16 2005 +0000

description:
English improvements.

diffstat:

 www/blur6ex/MESSAGE |  11 ++++++-----
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diffs (36 lines):

diff -r e96672de0e60 -r 21b325f20ea1 www/blur6ex/MESSAGE
--- a/www/blur6ex/MESSAGE       Fri Feb 18 13:57:37 2005 +0000
+++ b/www/blur6ex/MESSAGE       Fri Feb 18 14:00:16 2005 +0000
@@ -1,18 +1,19 @@
 ===========================================================================
-$NetBSD: MESSAGE,v 1.2 2005/02/18 07:17:13 xtraeme Exp $
+$NetBSD: MESSAGE,v 1.3 2005/02/18 14:00:16 wiz Exp $
 
-To configure blur6ex, the following steps should be completed:
+To configure blur6ex, complete the following steps:
 
 $ mysql -e "create database blur6ex"
 $ mysql -e "grant all on blur6ex.* to ''@'' identified by 'PASSWORD'"
 $ mysql blur6ex < ${PREFIX}/share/doc/blur6ex/blur6ex_tables.sql
 
-Modify "PASSWORD" with your desired password.
+Change "PASSWORD" to your desired password.
 
 Modify ${PKG_SYSCONFDIR.blur6exdb}/db.php and
 ${PKG_SYSCONFDIR.blur6ex}/index.php.
 
-Before accessing you should create an user for the admin group:
+Before accessing the blog, you should create a user for the admin
+group:
 
 $ mysql
 mysql> use blur6ex;
@@ -20,7 +21,7 @@
   -> permissionGroups (username,pGroup) values ('YOUR-NAME', 'admin' );
 mysql> quit
 
-Now you can access to it with the following url:
+Now you can access it at the following URL:
 
 http://localhost/blog/