[pkgsrc/trunk]: pkgsrc/doc/guide/files Reworded to make reading easier.

[rillig <rillig%pkgsrc.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/pkgsrc/rev/9848b31939eb
branches:  trunk
changeset: 520431:9848b31939eb
user:      rillig <rillig%pkgsrc.org@localhost>
date:      Sat Oct 21 11:57:11 2006 +0000

description:
Reworded to make reading easier.

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 doc/guide/files/getting.xml |  19 +++++++++----------
 1 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

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diff -r 631645cd5131 -r 9848b31939eb doc/guide/files/getting.xml
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-<!-- $NetBSD: getting.xml,v 1.13 2006/09/25 09:45:31 rillig Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: getting.xml,v 1.14 2006/10/21 11:57:11 rillig Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="getting">
 <title>Where to get pkgsrc and how to keep it up-to-date</title>
 
-       <para>The most common location where pkgsrc is installed is
-       <filename>/usr/pkgsrc</filename> for the <quote>package
-       sources</quote> and <filename>/usr/pkg</filename> for the
-       installed binary packages. You are though free to install the
-       sources and binary packages wherever you want in your
-       filesystem, provided that both paths do not contain white-space
-       or other characters that are interpreted specially by the shell
-       and some other programs. A safe bet is to use only letters,
-       digits, underscores and dashes in the names.</para>
+<para>Before you download and extract the files, you need to decide
+where you want to extract them. When using pkgsrc as root user, pkgsrc
+is usually installed in <filename>/usr/pkgsrc</filename>. You are though
+free to install the sources and binary packages wherever you want in
+your filesystem, provided that the pathname does not contain white-space
+or other characters that are interpreted specially by the shell and some
+other programs. A safe bet is to use only letters, digits, underscores
+and dashes.</para>
 
 <sect1 id="getting-first">
 <title>Getting pkgsrc for the first time</title>