[pkgsrc/trunk]: pkgsrc/doc/guide/files Small improvements of the wording. Men...

[rillig <rillig%pkgsrc.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/pkgsrc/rev/9fac3e28d99f
branches:  trunk
changeset: 518798:9fac3e28d99f
user:      rillig <rillig%pkgsrc.org@localhost>
date:      Mon Sep 18 12:16:25 2006 +0000

description:
Small improvements of the wording. Mentioned that on mirrors, the base
directory may be different from /pub/pkgsrc.

diffstat:

 doc/guide/files/ftp-layout.xml |  16 +++++++++-------
 1 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diffs (37 lines):

diff -r 8ed964eea959 -r 9fac3e28d99f doc/guide/files/ftp-layout.xml
--- a/doc/guide/files/ftp-layout.xml    Mon Sep 18 12:14:53 2006 +0000
+++ b/doc/guide/files/ftp-layout.xml    Mon Sep 18 12:16:25 2006 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: ftp-layout.xml,v 1.5 2006/05/29 07:47:34 rillig Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: ftp-layout.xml,v 1.6 2006/09/18 12:16:25 rillig Exp $ -->
 
 <appendix id="ftp-layout">
 <title>Directory layout of the pkgsrc FTP server</title>
@@ -7,9 +7,11 @@
        is quite complex for newbies. This chapter explains where you
        find things on the FTP server. The base directory on
        <filename>ftp.NetBSD.org</filename> is <ulink
-       url="ftp://ftp.NetBSD.org/pub/pkgsrc";><filename>/pub/pkgsrc</filename></ulink>.
-       This directory contains some subdirectories, which are explained
-       below.</para>
+       url="ftp://ftp.NetBSD.org/pub/pkgsrc/";><filename>/pub/pkgsrc/</filename></ulink>.
+       On other servers it may be different, but inside this directory,
+       everything should look the same, no matter on which server you
+       are. This directory contains some subdirectories, which are
+       explained below.</para>
 
 <sect1 id="ftp-bootstrap">
 <title><filename>bootstrap-pkgsrc</filename>: Bootstrap kits</title>
@@ -76,9 +78,9 @@
        source archives.</para>
 
        <para>The directory <filename>pkgsrc</filename> contains a
-       snapshot of the CVS repository, which is updated on a regularly
-       basis. The file <filename>pkgsrc.tar.gz</filename> contains the
-       same as the directory, ready to be downloaded as a whole.</para>
+       snapshot of the CVS repository, which is updated regularly. The
+       file <filename>pkgsrc.tar.gz</filename> contains the same as the
+       directory, ready to be downloaded as a whole.</para>
 
        <para>In the directories for the quarterly branches, there is an
        additional file called