CVS commit: pkgsrc/databases/redis

["David A. Holland" <dholland%netbsd.org@localhost>]

Module Name:    pkgsrc
Committed By:   dholland
Date:           Wed Dec 21 00:23:22 UTC 2016

Modified Files:
        pkgsrc/databases/redis: DESCR

Log Message:
minor edits for grammar/usage


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cvs rdiff -u -r1.1 -r1.2 pkgsrc/databases/redis/DESCR

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Index: pkgsrc/databases/redis/DESCR
diff -u pkgsrc/databases/redis/DESCR:1.1 pkgsrc/databases/redis/DESCR:1.2
--- pkgsrc/databases/redis/DESCR:1.1    Thu Jun 13 17:41:34 2013
+++ pkgsrc/databases/redis/DESCR        Wed Dec 21 00:23:22 2016
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 Redis is an advanced key-value store. It is similar to memcached but the
 dataset is not volatile, and values can be strings, exactly like in memcached,
-but also lists, sets, and ordered sets. All this data types can be manipulated
+but also lists, sets, and ordered sets. All these data types can be manipulated
 with atomic operations to push/pop elements, add/remove elements, perform
-server side union, intersection, difference between sets, and so forth. Redis
-supports different kind of sorting abilities.
+server side union, intersection, and difference between sets, and so forth.
+Redis also supports different kinds of sorting.