>Number:         23350
>Category:       misc
>Synopsis:       miscellaneous fixes to wd(4)'s man page
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    misc-bug-people
>State:          open
>Class:          sw-bug
>Submitter-Id:   net
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Nov 03 01:42:00 UTC 2003
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Soren Jacobsen
>Release:        NetBSD 1.6ZE
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: NetBSD lothar.blef.org 1.6ZE NetBSD 1.6ZE (LOTHAR) #34: Sun Nov  2 10:16:08 PST 2003  soren@lothar.blef.org:/usr/src/sys/arch/i386/compile/LOTHAR i386
Architecture: i386
Machine: i386
>Description:
Typo or grammar fixes, readability improvements, missing quotation mark, and
"New sentence, new line."
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
Index: wd.4
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/src/share/man/man4/wd.4,v
retrieving revision 1.11
diff -u -r1.11 wd.4
--- wd.4	2003/10/15 08:38:10	1.11
+++ wd.4	2003/11/03 01:21:54
@@ -35,21 +35,21 @@
 .Sh DESCRIPTION
 The
 .Nm wd
-driver supports hard disk which emulate the Western
-Digital WD100x.  This includes standard MFM, RLL, ESDI, IDE and EIDE
-drives.
+driver supports hard disks that emulate the Western
+Digital WD100x.
+This includes standard MFM, RLL, ESDI, IDE and EIDE drives.
 .Pp
 The flags are used only with controllers that support DMA operations and
 mode settings (like some pciide controllers).
-The lowest order nibble (rightmost digit) of the flags define the PIO mode
-to use, the next set of four bits the DMA mode and the third nibble the
+The lowest order nibble (rightmost digit) of the flags defines the PIO mode,
+the next four bits define the DMA mode and the third nibble defines the
 UltraDMA mode.
 For each set of four bits, the 3 lower bits define the mode to use
 and the last bit must be set to 1 for this setting to be used.
 For DMA and UDMA, 0xf (1111) means 'disable'.
 For example, a flags value of 0x0fac (1111 1010 1100)
 means 'use PIO mode 4, DMA mode 2, disable UltraDMA'.
-0x0000 means "use whatever the drive claims to support.
+0x0000 means "use whatever the drive claims to support."
 .Sh SEE ALSO
 .Xr ata 4 ,
 .Xr intro 4 ,
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