CVS commit: pkgsrc/doc/guide/files

["David H. Gutteridge" <gutteridge%netbsd.org@localhost>]

Module Name:    pkgsrc
Committed By:   gutteridge
Date:           Wed Apr 29 23:09:48 UTC 2020

Modified Files:
        pkgsrc/doc/guide/files: submit.xml

Log Message:
submit.xml: minor grammar tweaks


To generate a diff of this commit:
cvs rdiff -u -r1.35 -r1.36 pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/submit.xml

Please note that diffs are not public domain; they are subject to the
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Modified files:

Index: pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/submit.xml
diff -u pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/submit.xml:1.35 pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/submit.xml:1.36
--- pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/submit.xml:1.35      Mon Feb 24 21:13:56 2020
+++ pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/submit.xml   Wed Apr 29 23:09:48 2020
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: submit.xml,v 1.35 2020/02/24 21:13:56 rillig Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: submit.xml,v 1.36 2020/04/29 23:09:48 gutteridge Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="submit"> <?dbhtml filename="submit.html"?>
 <title>Submitting and Committing</title>
@@ -209,11 +209,11 @@ much easier to get wrong than <quote>cvs
 
 <para>Renaming packages is not recommended.</para>
 
-<para>When renaming packages, be sure to fix any references to old name
+<para>When renaming packages, be sure to fix any references to the old name
   in other Makefiles, options, buildlink files, etc.</para>
 
 <para>
-  Also when renaming a package, please add
+  Also, when renaming a package, please add
   the package name and version pattern(s) of the previous package
   to <varname>SUPERSEDES</varname>.
   This may be repeated for multiple renames.