Re: CVS commit: src/doc

[Soren Jacobsen <snj%pobox.com@localhost>]

On Oct 2, 2009, at 12:17 AM, Christoph Egger wrote:

> Index: src/doc/BUILDING.mdoc
> diff -u src/doc/BUILDING.mdoc:1.77 src/doc/BUILDING.mdoc:1.78
> --- src/doc/BUILDING.mdoc:1.77  Sun Sep 27 18:08:24 2009
> +++ src/doc/BUILDING.mdoc       Fri Oct  2 07:17:16 2009
> @@ -1165,7 +1165,7 @@
> .Sy /bin/sh
> is unusually old and broken, the Korn Shell
> .Sy ( /bin/ksh ) ,
> -if available, may be a usable alternative.
> +if available, may be an usable alternative.

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> Index: src/doc/CHANGES.prev
> diff -u src/doc/CHANGES.prev:1.95 src/doc/CHANGES.prev:1.96
> --- src/doc/CHANGES.prev:1.95   Sat May  2 06:21:16 2009
> +++ src/doc/CHANGES.prev        Fri Oct  2 07:17:16 2009
> @@ -1608,7 +1608,7 @@
>                 counts (e.g. isofs). [mycroft 19941026]
>         Reworked part of the `mcd' driver to make it more reliable. [mycroft
>                 19941026]
> -	Made fork(2)ing with a user-defined LDT work (and not panic).  
> [mycroft
> +	Made fork(2)ing with an user-defined LDT work (and not panic).  
> [mycroft

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> @@ -2644,7 +2644,7 @@
>                 underlying device and a printable "external name"
>                 (name + unit number), thus eliminating if_name and if_unit.
>                 Updated interface to (*if_watchdog)() and (*if_reset)()
> -               to take a struct ifnet *, rather than a unit number.
> +               to take a struct ifnet *, rather than an unit number.

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> @@ -3512,7 +3512,7 @@
>                 new bus dma framework.  [thorpej 19970606]
>         alpha: Add support for SGMAP-mapped DMA, using new bus dma
>                 framework, allowing ISA DMA to function.  [thorpej 19970606]
> -       isa: convert isadma.c to be a user of new bus dma framework,
> +       isa: convert isadma.c to be an user of new bus dma framework,

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> @@ -4307,7 +4307,7 @@
>                 Sweep inspired by a discussion of a bug introduced in
>                 OpenBSD on Bugtraq.  [thorpej 19980728]
>         libedit: add 'edit on|off' editrc command, which is used to advise
> -               invoking programs if a user's does or doesn't want editline
> +               invoking programs if an user's does or doesn't want editline

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> @@ -4498,7 +4498,7 @@
>         newsmips: Switch to UVM by default on newsmips. [tsubai 19981116]
>         i386: Switch to gas.new on i386. [kristerw 19981116]
>         sparc: Switch to gas.new on sparc. [kristerw 19981116]
> -       mbrlabel(8): Add a utility to access partitions on MBR labeled
> +       mbrlabel(8): Add an utility to access partitions on MBR labeled

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> @@ -4749,7 +4749,7 @@
>                 [bad 19990323]
>         dump(8): Add read cache. Speeds up dump operations in most cases
>                 [bouyer,mjl 19990323]
> -       net: prevent bind(2)ing to a unicast address/port if the uids of the
> +	net: prevent bind(2)ing to an unicast address/port if the uids of  
> the

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> @@ -4821,7 +4821,7 @@
>                 [augustss 19990512]
>         ftp(1): support `[user[:password]@]' in http URLs and $http_proxy.
>                 [lukem 19990513]
> -       kernel: Allow a user-specified stack to be used in the child after a
> +	kernel: Allow an user-specified stack to be used in the child  
> after a

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> @@ -4835,7 +4835,7 @@
>                 sessions eventually close down). add transfer time to
>                 syslog messages for get/put. other cleanups.  [lukem 19990518]
>         whois(1): imported client from RIPE WHOIS Tools 2.4. [tron 19990518]
> -	net: Make layer 2 protocol input routines private, and with a  
> uniform
> +	net: Make layer 2 protocol input routines private, and with an  
> uniform

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> @@ -5632,7 +5632,7 @@
>         i386: utilize uvm_pagezeroidle.  [thorpej 20000424]
>         poweroff: Powers down the system equivalent to "halt -p", but
>                 allows powering down the system from an exec(2) call, e.g.
> -               via a user which has "poweroff" as login shell. The command
> +               via an user which has "poweroff" as login shell. The command

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> @@ -8704,7 +8704,7 @@
>                 [msaitoh 20070130]
>         uplcom(4): Add support for Willcom WS002IN PHS device
>                 (Prolific Technology PL2303X). [msaitoh 20070131]
> -	zaurus: Updates to allow Zaurus screen to rotate 90 degrees to a  
> usable
> +	zaurus: Updates to allow Zaurus screen to rotate 90 degrees to an  
> usable

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> @@ -9725,7 +9725,7 @@
>         wm(4): Add support for more Ethernet ICH9 devices. [bouyer 20081015]
>         rump: Add networking support to rump.  Support is available in
>                 libraries prefixed with librumpnet.  [pooka 20081016]
> -	rump_nfs(8): Add support for a userspace NFS client.  [pooka  
> 20081016]
> +	rump_nfs(8): Add support for an userspace NFS client.  [pooka  
> 20081016]

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> Index: src/doc/roadmaps/storage
> diff -u src/doc/roadmaps/storage:1.5 src/doc/roadmaps/storage:1.6
> --- src/doc/roadmaps/storage:1.5        Tue Sep 15 21:07:58 2009
> +++ src/doc/roadmaps/storage    Fri Oct  2 07:17:16 2009
> @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
> 9. In-kernel iSCSI Initiator
> ----------------------------
>
> -NetBSD has had a userland implementation of an iSCSI initiator since
> +NetBSD has had an userland implementation of an iSCSI initiator since

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