[src/trunk]: src/share/man/man9 New sentence, new line; slight wording improv...

[wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/61f345f5a359
branches:  trunk
changeset: 327957:61f345f5a359
user:      wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Sat Mar 22 11:35:03 2014 +0000

description:
New sentence, new line; slight wording improvements.

diffstat:

 share/man/man9/ltsleep.9 |  9 +++++----
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diffs (37 lines):

diff -r 7ce3fb21c5a1 -r 61f345f5a359 share/man/man9/ltsleep.9
--- a/share/man/man9/ltsleep.9  Sat Mar 22 11:25:54 2014 +0000
+++ b/share/man/man9/ltsleep.9  Sat Mar 22 11:35:03 2014 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: ltsleep.9,v 1.16 2014/03/22 11:25:54 skrll Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: ltsleep.9,v 1.17 2014/03/22 11:35:03 wiz Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 1996, 2002, 2007 The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -139,7 +139,8 @@
 .It Fa mtx
 A
 .Xr mutex 9
-representing the lock protecting the data-structures. On entry
+representing the lock protecting the data-structures.
+On entry
 .Fn mtsleep
 will release the lock and re-acquire the lock on return.
 .It Fa priority
@@ -191,7 +192,7 @@
 .Fn tsleep
 and
 .Fn mtsleep
-returns because of a timeout it returns
+return because of a timeout, the return value is
 .Er EWOULDBLOCK .
 .Sh MIGRATING TO CONDVAR
 Note the conversion from tsleep/wakeup into
@@ -200,7 +201,7 @@
 .Dq blindly .
 Code logic should be understood before changing, and it may also need to be
 revisited for the change.
-Please also read
+Please also read the
 .Xr condvar 9
 man page.
 .Pp