[src/netbsd-1-5]: src/distrib/notes/common Pull up revisions 1.19-1.20 (reque...

[he <he%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/c027e7f7814f
branches:  netbsd-1-5
changeset: 491674:c027e7f7814f
user:      he <he%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Sun May 06 21:34:26 2001 +0000

description:
Pull up revisions 1.19-1.20 (requested by he):
  Fix warnings from html generation, update copyright date,
  plus various minor spelling and consistency fixes.

diffstat:

 distrib/notes/common/sysinst |  35 +++++++++++++++++------------------
 1 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

diffs (143 lines):

diff -r a8ab28977de9 -r c027e7f7814f distrib/notes/common/sysinst
--- a/distrib/notes/common/sysinst      Sun May 06 21:31:03 2001 +0000
+++ b/distrib/notes/common/sysinst      Sun May 06 21:34:26 2001 +0000
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: sysinst,v 1.5.4.7 2001/04/23 22:21:21 he Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: sysinst,v 1.5.4.8 2001/05/06 21:34:26 he Exp $
 .\"
-.\" Copyright (c) 1999, 2000 The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.
+.\" Copyright (c) 1999-2001 The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.
 .\" All rights reserved.
 .\"
 .\" Redistribution and use in source and binary forms, with or without
@@ -194,11 +194,11 @@
 command to alter the variable values:
 .Pp
 .Dl db> Ic "write pcic_isa_intr_alloc_mask 0x0a00"
-.Dl pcic_isa_intr_alloc_mask           0xff5f = 0xa00
+.Dl "pcic_isa_intr_alloc_mask            0xff5f = 0xa00"
 .Dl db> Ic "write pcic_isa_alloc_iobase 0x330"
-.Dl pcic_isa_alloc_iobase              0x400 = 0x330
+.Dl "pcic_isa_alloc_iobase               0x400 = 0x330"
 .Dl db> Ic "write pcic_isa_alloc_iosize 0x0bf"
-.Dl pcic_isa_alloc_iosize              0xbff = 0xbf
+.Dl "pcic_isa_alloc_iosize               0xbff = 0xbf"
 .Dl db> Ic "continue"
 .Pp
 Note that, since some floppy images may not have symbol information in
@@ -314,7 +314,7 @@
 .Em n
 is the number of megabytes of
 main memory in your system. If you wish to install
-the X window system as well, you will need at least
+the X Window System as well, you will need at least
 60 MB more.
 .bullet)
 .if \n[alpha]:\n[i386]:\n[news68k] \{\
@@ -336,7 +336,6 @@
 .Dl Ic "rawrite"
 .Pp
 When asked for a source filename, answer
-.Pp
 .if r_i386 \{\
 .Dl Pa \&..\efloppy\eboot1.fs
 for the first diskette and
@@ -400,7 +399,7 @@
 it may be more convenient. Go back to the main menu.
 .It
 Choose
-.Me install
+.Me install .
 .It
 You will be guided through some steps regarding the
 setup of your disk, and the selection of distributed components
@@ -442,7 +441,7 @@
 .Pa /usr/X11R6/lib/X11/doc .
 .if !\n[macppc]:\n[sparc] \{\
 Further information can be found on
-.Lk http://www.xfree86.org/
+.Lk http://www.xfree86.org/ .
 .\}
 .bullet)
 .bullet)
@@ -586,7 +585,7 @@
 .Ic Configure network option .
 If you only want to temporarily
 use networking during the installation, you can specify these
-parameters later. If you are not using Domain Name Service (DNS),
+parameters later. If you are not using the Domain Name System (DNS),
 you can give an empty response in reply to answers relating to
 this.
 .It
@@ -847,7 +846,7 @@
 .Nx ,
 the kernel from the
 install floppy was copied onto the hard drive in a special
-step. In the new install system, the kernel on the floppy is
+step. In the current install system, the kernel on the floppy is
 unsuited to being copied onto the hard drive. Instead, a new set,
 .Sy kern ,
 has been added which contains a generic kernel to
@@ -914,7 +913,7 @@
 following sections describe each of those methods. After
 reading the one about the method you will be using, you
 can continue to section labeled
-.Sq Extracting the distribution sets
+.Sq Extracting the distribution sets .
 .It
 .Em Installation using ftp
 .Pp
@@ -923,7 +922,7 @@
 the install procedure.
 .Ic sysinst
 will do this for you, asking you
-to provide some data, like IP number, hostname, etc. If you
+to provide some data, like IP address, hostname, etc. If you
 do not have name service set up for the machine that you
 are installing on, you can just press
 .Key RETURN
@@ -934,7 +933,7 @@
 and the account name and password used to log into that
 host using ftp. If you did not set up DNS when answering
 the questions to configure networking, you will need to
-specify an IP number instead of a hostname for the ftp
+specify an IP address instead of a hostname for the ftp
 server.
 .Pp
 .Ic sysinst
@@ -948,7 +947,7 @@
 the install procedure.
 .Ic sysinst
 will do this for you, asking you
-to provide some data, like IP number, hostname, etc. If you
+to provide some data, like IP address, hostname, etc. If you
 do not have name service set up for the machine that you
 are installing on, you can just press
 .Key RETURN
@@ -961,7 +960,7 @@
 exported to your machine.
 .Pp
 If you did not set up DNS when answering the questions to
-configure networking, you will need to specify an IP number
+configure networking, you will need to specify an IP address
 instead of a hostname for the NFS server.
 .It
 .Em Installation from CD-ROM
@@ -1018,7 +1017,7 @@
 distribution
 have been made available, you can either extract all the
 sets (a full installation), or only extract sets that
-you have selected. In the latter case you will be shown the
+you have selected. In the latter case, you will be shown the
 currently selected sets, and given the opportunity to select
 the sets you want. Some sets always need to be installed
 .Pq Sy kern, base No and Sy etc
@@ -1035,7 +1034,7 @@
 use this configuration for normal operation. If so, these
 values will be installed in the network configuration files.
 The next menu will allow you to select the time zone that you're in,
-to make sure your clock has the right offset from GMT. 
+to make sure your clock has the right offset from UTC. 
 Finally you can set a password for the "root" account, to prevent 
 the machine coming up without access restrictions.  
 .It