[src/trunk]: src/distrib/notes/hpcmips Cleanup english usage in places.

[imp <imp%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/b72dc0470e1e
branches:  trunk
changeset: 494491:b72dc0470e1e
user:      imp <imp%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Fri Jul 07 01:39:26 2000 +0000

description:
Cleanup english usage in places.
Spell Windows CE with a space always.
Add Vr4181 to list of supported processors
Change VR to Vr since that's how it is typically represented in datasheets.

Changes approved by: Jun Ebihara-san

diffstat:

 distrib/notes/hpcmips/contents |  14 +++++++-------
 distrib/notes/hpcmips/hardware |  15 +++++++++------
 distrib/notes/hpcmips/install  |  14 +++++++-------
 distrib/notes/hpcmips/prep     |  10 ++++++----
 distrib/notes/hpcmips/whatis   |   5 +++--
 5 files changed, 32 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-)

diffs (144 lines):

diff -r dbb87e563079 -r b72dc0470e1e distrib/notes/hpcmips/contents
--- a/distrib/notes/hpcmips/contents    Fri Jul 07 01:26:13 2000 +0000
+++ b/distrib/notes/hpcmips/contents    Fri Jul 07 01:39:26 2000 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: contents,v 1.5 2000/06/14 03:33:11 shin Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: contents,v 1.6 2000/07/07 01:39:26 imp Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 1999 The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@
 or some other suitable name. Please note that these kernels are simply
 gzipped and are not in tar archives.
 .Pp
-The WindowsCE-based utilities necessary for installing and running
+The Windows CE-based utilities necessary for installing and running
 .Nx
 can
 be found in the
@@ -467,23 +467,23 @@
 
 .Bl -tag -width pbsdboot.exe
 .It Pa pbsdboot.exe
-The NetBSD/hpcmips Booter utility. This program is used to boot the
+The NetBSD/hpcmips boot loader utility. This program is used to boot the
 .Nx
-kernel from within WindowsCE (version 2.0 and later).
+kernel from within Windows CE (version 2.0 and later).
 .br
 .Em 122k
 .El
 
 .Bl -tag -width pbsdboot1.exe
 .It Pa pbsdboot1.exe
-The NetBSD/hpcmips Booter utility. This program is used to boot the
+The NetBSD/hpcmips boot loader utility. This program is used to boot the
 .Nx
-kernel from within WindowsCE (version 1.0).
+kernel from within Windows CE (version 1.0).
 .br
 .Em 134k
 .El
 
 .Pp
-These files are all WindowsCE binary. If you need them,
+These files are Windows CE binaries. If you need them,
 the sources for these utilities are in the
 .Pa src/arch/hpcmips/stand/ directory.
diff -r dbb87e563079 -r b72dc0470e1e distrib/notes/hpcmips/hardware
--- a/distrib/notes/hpcmips/hardware    Fri Jul 07 01:26:13 2000 +0000
+++ b/distrib/notes/hpcmips/hardware    Fri Jul 07 01:39:26 2000 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: hardware,v 1.7 2000/06/13 12:56:13 shin Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: hardware,v 1.8 2000/07/07 01:39:26 imp Exp $
 A H/PC machine contains a keyboard and a touch screen and
 generally has 8MB or more of RAM.  The port supports the HPC
 form factor, as well as the H/PC Pro and PsPC (Palmsized PC)
@@ -21,8 +21,8 @@
 .      br
 .      Bl -bullet -compact 
 .              section CASIO
-.                      item (CASSIOPEIA for DoCoMo)
-.                      item (CASSIOPEIA E-55)
+.                      item CASSIOPEIA for DoCoMo
+.                      item CASSIOPEIA E-55
 .              section Compaq
 .                      item C Series 2010c
 .                      item C Series 810
@@ -66,11 +66,14 @@
 .      It Em CPUs:
 .      br
 .      Bl -bullet -compact 
-.              item VR4102-based: 
-.              item VR4111-based: 
-.              item VR4121-based: 
+.              item Vr4102-based: 
+.              item Vr4111-based: 
+.              item Vr4121-based: 
+.              item Vr4181-based:
 .              item TX3912-based: TX3912 machines are not supported with installation kernel. use special kernel for TX3912.
 .              item TX3922-based:  TX3922 machines are not supported with installation kernel. use special kernel for TX3922
+.      section RAM requirements
+.              item 8MB of RAM is required to run NetBSD/hpcmips.  4MB is insufficient for most purposes.
 .      section console device
 .              item built-in LCD screen
 .              item built-in keyboard
diff -r dbb87e563079 -r b72dc0470e1e distrib/notes/hpcmips/install
--- a/distrib/notes/hpcmips/install     Fri Jul 07 01:26:13 2000 +0000
+++ b/distrib/notes/hpcmips/install     Fri Jul 07 01:39:26 2000 +0000
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: install,v 1.4 2000/03/19 16:17:12 jun Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: install,v 1.5 2000/07/07 01:39:27 imp Exp $
 .
 boot with `pbsdboot.exe' and `netbsd' in `installation' directory.
-`sysinst' will automatically starts.  
+`sysinst' will automatically start. 
 
-NetBSD/hpcmips kernel with system installer costs almost 6MB memory area.
-Please allocate Windows CE memory to load sysinst-netbsd kernel.
-If you failed pbsdboot.exe with "cannot allocate heap" error,
-allocate more memory and less disk from Windows CE 
-[Setting]->[ControlPanel]->[System]->[Memory].
+The NetBSD/hpcmips kernel and system install consume about 6MB of memory.
+Please configure the Windows CE memory setting to allow this amount of
+memory to be used.  If you failed pbsdboot.exe with "cannot allocate heap"
+error, configure more RAM for memory and less for disk with the dialog at
+[Setting]->[ControlPanel]->[System]->[Memory] under Windows CE.
 
 .so ../common/sysinst
diff -r dbb87e563079 -r b72dc0470e1e distrib/notes/hpcmips/prep
--- a/distrib/notes/hpcmips/prep        Fri Jul 07 01:26:13 2000 +0000
+++ b/distrib/notes/hpcmips/prep        Fri Jul 07 01:39:26 2000 +0000
@@ -1,7 +1,9 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: prep,v 1.1 2000/02/20 15:45:35 jun Exp $       
+.\"    $NetBSD: prep,v 1.2 2000/07/07 01:39:27 imp Exp $       
 
 First and foremost, before beginning the installation process,
 .Em make sure you have a reliable backup
-of any data on your CE memory space and setting that you
-wish to keep. 
-
+of any data on your Windows CE memory and settings that you
+wish to keep.
+Sadly, there is no freely available program to accomplish this task,
+so you must use ActiveSync or another commercially available program to
+backup your Windows CE machine before installing NetBSD/hpcmips.
diff -r dbb87e563079 -r b72dc0470e1e distrib/notes/hpcmips/whatis
--- a/distrib/notes/hpcmips/whatis      Fri Jul 07 01:26:13 2000 +0000
+++ b/distrib/notes/hpcmips/whatis      Fri Jul 07 01:39:26 2000 +0000
@@ -1,12 +1,13 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: whatis,v 1.1 2000/02/20 15:45:36 jun Exp $     
+.\"    $NetBSD: whatis,v 1.2 2000/07/07 01:39:27 imp Exp $     
 .\" This is the first public release of NetBSD/hpcmips.
 This is the snapshot release of NetBSD/hpcmips.
 .Pp
 NetBSD/hpcmips brings the
 NetBSD operating system to
 MIPS based Windows CE PDA machines.  Currently, the 
-VR4102, VR4111, VR4121, TX3912, and TX3922 processors are supported.
+Vr4102, Vr4111, Vr4121, Vr4181, TX3912, and TX3922 processors are supported.
 .Pp
 The port name "hpcmips" comes from the name for some of the hardware
 that NetBSD/hpcmips runs on: MIPS based systems in Microsoft's
 H/PC (Handheld PC) form factor.
+The palm sized units are also supported, but lack an input method.