[src/trunk]: src/share/man/man4 Grammar and punctuation fixes.

[wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/0d8695568326
branches:  trunk
changeset: 521326:0d8695568326
user:      wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Mon Jan 28 12:26:08 2002 +0000

description:
Grammar and punctuation fixes.

diffstat:

 share/man/man4/ip6.4 |  16 +++++++---------
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diffs (47 lines):

diff -r 773ec2d80ffa -r 0d8695568326 share/man/man4/ip6.4
--- a/share/man/man4/ip6.4      Mon Jan 28 09:56:43 2002 +0000
+++ b/share/man/man4/ip6.4      Mon Jan 28 12:26:08 2002 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: ip6.4,v 1.9 2001/10/15 09:51:16 itojun Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: ip6.4,v 1.10 2002/01/28 12:26:08 wiz Exp $
 .\"    $KAME: ip6.4,v 1.11 2000/05/07 06:21:41 itojun Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (C) 1999 WIDE Project.
@@ -384,8 +384,8 @@
 .Pp
 If the socket address structure contains an IPv6 address (e.g., the
 sin6_family member is
-.Dv AF_INET6
-), then the node identified by that
+.Dv AF_INET6 ) ,
+then the node identified by that
 address must be a neighbor of the sending host.
 If that address
 equals the destination IPv6 address of the datagram, then this is
@@ -584,7 +584,7 @@
 .\" socket option was added.
 .Pp
 For ICMPv6 raw sockets,
-the kernel will calculate and insert the ICMPv6 checksum for
+the kernel will calculate and insert the ICMPv6 checksum
 since this checksum is mandatory.
 .Pp
 For other raw IPv6 sockets (that is, for raw IPv6 sockets created
@@ -692,14 +692,12 @@
 .\" is supplied on KAME/NetBSD only.
 .\"
 .Sh HISTORY
-The implementation is based on KAME stack
-.Po
-which is descendant of WIDE hydrangea IPv6 stack kit
-.Pc .
+The implementation is based on the KAME stack (which
+is a descendant of the WIDE hydrangea IPv6 stack kit).
 .Pp
 Part of the document was shamelessly copied from RFC2553 and RFC2292.
 .\"
 .Sh BUGS
 The
 .Dv IPV6_NEXTHOP
-object/option is not fully implemented as of writing this.
+object/option is not fully implemented as of this writing.