[src/trunk]: src Some typo and grammar fixes. Begin new sentences with upper ...

[wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/ca47693ded2b
branches:  trunk
changeset: 540322:ca47693ded2b
user:      wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Mon Dec 09 18:59:07 2002 +0000

description:
Some typo and grammar fixes. Begin new sentences with upper case letters.

diffstat:

 UPDATING |  26 ++++++++++++--------------
 1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

diffs (96 lines):

diff -r 20a91cc6a427 -r ca47693ded2b UPDATING
--- a/UPDATING  Mon Dec 09 17:28:59 2002 +0000
+++ b/UPDATING  Mon Dec 09 18:59:07 2002 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-$NetBSD: UPDATING,v 1.78 2002/12/04 12:50:43 lukem Exp $
+$NetBSD: UPDATING,v 1.79 2002/12/09 18:59:07 wiz Exp $
 
 This file is intended to be a brief introduction to the build
 process and a reference on what to do if something doesn't work.
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
        NetBSD ARM ELF uses the soft-VFP floating point model by
        default.  However, the assembler lacked support for marking
        objects as using the VFP floating point format, and the
-       compiler was no properly passing the flag indicating "soft-VFP"
+       compiler was not properly passing the flag indicating "soft-VFP"
        to the assembler.
 
        Unfortunately, this means that the linker will now consider
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@
 
        The only work-around for the problem is to recompile all of
        the libraries on the system.  The easiest way to do this for
-       system libraries is to install a binary snapshot; there are
+       system libraries is to install a binary snapshot; they are
        generally available on releng.netbsd.org.  Any packages you
        have installed which supply libraries will have to be recompiled
        if you wish to link new programs against those libraries.
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
 20021011:
        Systrace has been improved to support privilege elevation.
        Updating the kernel requires the userland part of systrace
-       to be rebuild.
+       to be rebuilt.
 
 20021010:
        The config(8) grammar was changed to allow options to register
@@ -113,13 +113,13 @@
                there is no working in-tree toolchain (hppa, ns32k, sh5,
                x86_64).
            -   EXTERNAL_TOOLCHAIN -- if defined by the user, points to the
-               root ofan external toolchain (e.g. /usr/local/gnu).  This
+               root of an external toolchain (e.g. /usr/local/gnu).  This
                enables the cross-build framework even for TOOLCHAIN_MISSING
                platforms.
 
 20020906:
        gehenna-devsw has been merged into the trunk. Need to update and
-       reinstall usr.sbin/config before build the kernel.
+       reinstall usr.sbin/config before building the kernel.
 
 20020822:
        Crunched rescue tools (contents of /bin and /sbin, plus others)
@@ -147,8 +147,8 @@
 
        sshd:*:16:16::0:0:& pseudo-user:/var/chroot/sshd:/sbin/nologin
        
-       also /var/chroot/sshd directory needs to be present (digged as a part of
-       build process).
+       Also /var/chroot/sshd directory needs to be present (digged as part of
+       the build process).
 
 20020426:
        NBUILDJOBS obsoleted in favor of just using -j.
@@ -161,12 +161,12 @@
        configuration from earlier systems (as far back as NetBSD 1.5).
 
 20020320:
-       <bsd.lib.mk> needs a new install(1) for it's "-a cmd" support.
-       build and install at usr.bin/xinstall before the build.
+       <bsd.lib.mk> needs a new install(1) for its "-a cmd" support.
+       Build and install at usr.bin/xinstall before the build.
 
 20020319:
-       raw IPv6 socket now makes strict checking for sa_family and sa_len
-       on send(2) operation.  be sure to have sbin/rtsol and usr.sbin/rtsold
+       Raw IPv6 socket now makes strict checking for sa_family and sa_len
+       on send(2) operation.  Be sure to have sbin/rtsol and usr.sbin/rtsold
        newer than November 2001 when you upgrade the kernel.
 
 20020311:
@@ -180,7 +180,6 @@
        the VAX assembly files.
 
 20020118:
-
        ntpd user/group has been added.  Need to hand add this in or builds
        will break as mtree aborts early.
 
@@ -193,7 +192,6 @@
        ntpd:*:15:15::0:0:Ntpd pseudo-user:/var/chroot/ntpd:/sbin/nologin
 
 20011207:
-
        If you're attempting to build a snapshot on sparc64 and are getting
        reloc errors from the toolchain groff binary this means your native
        toolchain has some broken C++ bits.