[src/trunk]: src/distrib/notes/macppc fix english

[ross <ross%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/d4796e568528
branches:  trunk
changeset: 476373:d4796e568528
user:      ross <ross%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Wed Sep 15 04:06:00 1999 +0000

description:
fix english

diffstat:

 distrib/notes/macppc/contents |   4 ++--
 distrib/notes/macppc/prep     |  28 +++++++++++++---------------
 distrib/notes/macppc/xfer     |   4 ++--
 3 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)

diffs (95 lines):

diff -r f1394b409040 -r d4796e568528 distrib/notes/macppc/contents
--- a/distrib/notes/macppc/contents     Wed Sep 15 03:59:44 1999 +0000
+++ b/distrib/notes/macppc/contents     Wed Sep 15 04:06:00 1999 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: contents,v 1.4 1999/05/27 01:04:14 ross Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: contents,v 1.5 1999/09/15 04:06:00 ross Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 1999 The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
 .\"    notice, this list of conditions and the following disclaimer in the
 .\"    documentation and/or other materials provided with the distribution.
 .\" 3. All advertising materials mentioning features or use of this software
-.\"    must display the following acknowledgement:
+.\"    must display the following acknowledgment:
 .\"        This product includes software developed by the NetBSD
 .\"        Foundation, Inc. and its contributors.
 .\" 4. Neither the name of The NetBSD Foundation nor the names of its
diff -r f1394b409040 -r d4796e568528 distrib/notes/macppc/prep
--- a/distrib/notes/macppc/prep Wed Sep 15 03:59:44 1999 +0000
+++ b/distrib/notes/macppc/prep Wed Sep 15 04:06:00 1999 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: prep,v 1.1 1999/04/12 13:46:25 tsubai Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: prep,v 1.2 1999/09/15 04:06:00 ross Exp $
 .
 .(Note
 Currently
@@ -8,37 +8,35 @@
 words,
 .Nx
 \*V
-cannot be installed on the hard drive on which MacOS and/or any other oparating
-systems reside.  This is because of
+cannot be installed on the hard drive on which MacOS and/or any other operating
+system resides.  This is because
 .Nx
 \*V
 currently does not support Apple's Disk Partition Map.
 .Note)
 .Pp
 Before you start, you must choose an installation method.  If your machine has
-an on-borad Ethernet and you have the connection to an NFS server that can
+an on-board Ethernet and you have the connection to an NFS server that can
 provide even ~30M for a diskless-root filesystem, then installation via the net
-is best.  Next best, if you have another machine that is running unix-like
-operating system and has two disk drives (or one, if you live dangerously), is
+is best.  Next best, if you have another machine that is a running unix-like
+operating system and has two disk drives (or one, if you live dangerously) is
 to copy a diskimage onto one drive.  Finally, you can install by using a second
 machine as a helper to prepare a bootable
 .Nx
 \*V
-disk.  If you have only one machine, you can still use floppy to install
+disk.  If you have only one machine, you can still use a floppy to install
 .Nx
 onto your machine.
 .Pp
 If your target is going to run diskless, then installation proceeds as for
 method 1.
 .(Note
-Unfortunately, since iMac lacks to support to boot an operating system other
-than MacOS from its local hard drive, you must choose the method when your
-target is iMac.
+Unfortunately, since the
+iMac lacks support for booting an operating system other
+than MacOS from its local hard drive, you must choose this method when your
+target is the iMac.
 .Note)
 .Pp
-The
 .Nx
-uses the standard sysinst installation utility.  You should examine the guide
-on the
-.Nx
-/
+\*V/macppc
+uses the standard sysinst installation utility.
diff -r f1394b409040 -r d4796e568528 distrib/notes/macppc/xfer
--- a/distrib/notes/macppc/xfer Wed Sep 15 03:59:44 1999 +0000
+++ b/distrib/notes/macppc/xfer Wed Sep 15 04:06:00 1999 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: xfer,v 1.1 1999/04/12 13:46:26 tsubai Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: xfer,v 1.2 1999/09/15 04:06:00 ross Exp $
 .
 Installation is supported from several media types, including:
 .Bl -bullet -compact
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
 .Nx
 system as the boot-server, have a look at the
 .Xr disklabel 8
-manual page for guidlines on how to proceed with this.  If the server runs
+manual page for guidelines on how to proceed with this.  If the server runs
 another operating system, consult the documentation that came with it (i.e.
 add_client(8) on SunOS).
 .Pp