[src/trunk]: src/share/man/man4/man4.x86 Wording improvements.

[wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/b8c6763561eb
branches:  trunk
changeset: 771749:b8c6763561eb
user:      wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Fri Dec 02 14:38:51 2011 +0000

description:
Wording improvements.

diffstat:

 share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_amdpmi.4 |  8 ++++----
 share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_pmi.4    |  6 +++---
 2 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diffs (44 lines):

diff -r 4ed4bca2d6e5 -r b8c6763561eb share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_amdpmi.4
--- a/share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_amdpmi.4    Fri Dec 02 13:50:55 2011 +0000
+++ b/share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_amdpmi.4    Fri Dec 02 14:38:51 2011 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: tprof_amdpmi.4,v 1.1 2011/12/02 12:17:51 yamt Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: tprof_amdpmi.4,v 1.2 2011/12/02 14:38:51 wiz Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c)2011 YAMAMOTO Takashi,
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -42,11 +42,11 @@
 driver is a
 .Xr tprof 4
 backend driver, which uses performance-monitoring events available for
-some of AMD processors.
+some AMD processors.
 .Pp
 It programs the processors so that "CPU Clocks not Halted" events
-(event select 0x76) to raise NMIs and the NMI handler collects
-a sample.
+(event select 0x76) to raise NMIs and the NMI handler collect
+samples.
 .\" ------------------------------------------------------------
 .\".Sh EXAMPLES
 .\" ------------------------------------------------------------
diff -r 4ed4bca2d6e5 -r b8c6763561eb share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_pmi.4
--- a/share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_pmi.4       Fri Dec 02 13:50:55 2011 +0000
+++ b/share/man/man4/man4.x86/tprof_pmi.4       Fri Dec 02 14:38:51 2011 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: tprof_pmi.4,v 1.1 2011/12/02 12:17:51 yamt Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: tprof_pmi.4,v 1.2 2011/12/02 14:38:51 wiz Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c)2011 YAMAMOTO Takashi,
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -45,8 +45,8 @@
 Intel Pentium 4 (NetBurst) processors.
 .Pp
 It programs the processors so that global_power_events events
-(ESCR Event Select = 0x13) to raise NMIs and the NMI handler collects
-a sample.
+(ESCR Event Select = 0x13) to raise NMIs and the NMI handler collect
+samples.
 .\" ------------------------------------------------------------
 .\".Sh EXAMPLES
 .\" ------------------------------------------------------------