[src/netbsd-7]: src/doc Some formatting and grammatical changes

[sborrill <sborrill%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/42dda1db4296
branches:  netbsd-7
changeset: 798273:42dda1db4296
user:      sborrill <sborrill%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Thu Aug 21 08:41:18 2014 +0000

description:
Some formatting and grammatical changes

diffstat:

 doc/CHANGES-7.0 |  63 +++++++++++++++++---------------------------------------
 1 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 44 deletions(-)

diffs (152 lines):

diff -r 837be80fae16 -r 42dda1db4296 doc/CHANGES-7.0
--- a/doc/CHANGES-7.0   Thu Aug 21 07:43:04 2014 +0000
+++ b/doc/CHANGES-7.0   Thu Aug 21 08:41:18 2014 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-# $NetBSD: CHANGES-7.0,v 1.1.2.15 2014/08/20 13:46:17 martin Exp $
+# $NetBSD: CHANGES-7.0,v 1.1.2.16 2014/08/21 08:41:18 sborrill Exp $
 
 A complete list of changes from the initial NetBSD 7.0 branch on 11 Aug 2014
 until the 7.0 release:
@@ -14,7 +14,6 @@
 sys/dev/usb/xhci.c                             1.24
 
        PR/49091: xhci: wrong wMaxPacketSize value
-
        While this is correct according to the specification only fixed sizes
        are allowed, i.e. 512 for SS, etc. Maybe these should be used?
        [skrll, ticket #3]
@@ -33,33 +32,25 @@
 
        Apply change from upstream to fix PR/48709 - port-alpha/48709: static
        threaded programs crash.
-
        With this fix the new weak symbol's st_other is not merged in, i.e. NOPV
        is not copied from the libc __libc_thr_init.
-
        * elflink.c (_bfd_elf_merge_symbol): If merging a new weak
        symbol that will be skipped, we don't have a new definition.
        [skrll, ticket #5]
 
 
-sys/dev/usb/motg.c                             1.7
-sys/dev/usb/motg.c                             1.8
+sys/dev/usb/motg.c                             1.7-1.8
 
        Trailing whitespace.
-
        Make this compile when DIAGNOSTIC isn't defined.
        [skrll, ticket #6]
 
-usr.sbin/postinstall/postinstall               1.177
-usr.sbin/postinstall/postinstall               1.178
-usr.sbin/postinstall/postinstall               1.179
+usr.sbin/postinstall/postinstall               1.177-1.179
 
        Check for and delete ${DEST_DIR}/@RUNDIR@, not /@RUNDIR@.
        Also remove an unnecessary eval in do_dhcpcdrundir and
        fix a typo in the description.
-
        Quoting fixes in several eval commands.
-
        In get_makevar, ask make to recursively expand the variable,
        not just print the unexpanded value.  This is done by
        using make -V '${VAR}' instead of make -V 'VAR'.
@@ -108,10 +99,7 @@
        Define AXEN_DEBUG.  From Takahiro HAYASHI.
        [skrll, ticket #10]
 
-sys/crypto/cprng_fast/cprng_fast.c             1.10
-sys/crypto/cprng_fast/cprng_fast.c             1.7
-sys/crypto/cprng_fast/cprng_fast.c             1.8
-sys/crypto/cprng_fast/cprng_fast.c             1.9
+sys/crypto/cprng_fast/cprng_fast.c             1.7-1.10
 
        Access to struct cprng_fast must be consistently at IPL_VM.
        Use percpu_foreach instead of manual iteration.
@@ -163,12 +151,10 @@
 
 sys/kern/subr_prf.c                            1.155
 
-       avoid calling into time code when cold, and avoid calling nanotime()
+       Avoid calling into time code when cold, and avoid calling nanotime()
        if we're not going to use the result anyway.
-
-       XXX: not necessarily the best fix, but better than crashing *early*
+       Not necessarily the best fix, but better than crashing *early*
        boot due to too-early nanotime() calls.
-
        [mrg, ticket #24]
 
 xsrc/external/mit/libdrm/dist/radeon/radeon_bo_gem.c   1.4
@@ -220,7 +206,7 @@
 
 sys/kern/exec_elf.c                            1.70
 
-       eliminate COMPAT_OLDNOTE and just always recognize the old notes.
+       Eliminate COMPAT_OLDNOTE and just always recognize the old notes.
        [chs, ticket #32]
 
 external/bsd/bind/Makefile.inc                 1.22
@@ -241,27 +227,23 @@
 sys/external/bsd/drm2/dist/drm/ttm/ttm_bo.c    1.6
 sys/external/bsd/drm2/ttm/ttm_bo_vm.c          1.3
 
-       bus_space_mmap cookies are not paddrs, so don't pmap_enter them!
+       bus_space_mmap cookies are not paddrs, so don't pmap_enter them.
        For gem and ttm objects backed by uvm_aobjs, share the vmobjlock.
        Simplify previous.
        [riastradh, ticket #36]
 
 external/gpl3/gcc/dist/gcc/config/vax/builtins.md 1.4
 external/gpl3/gcc/dist/gcc/config/vax/vax.c    1.10
-       Rework so that the ctzsi builtin is supported.
-
 lib/libc/compiler_rt/Makefile.inc              1.26
-       VAX does need __clzsi2
+libexec/ld.elf_so/arch/vax/rtld_start.S                1.23-1.24
 
-libexec/ld.elf_so/arch/vax/rtld_start.S                1.23
-libexec/ld.elf_so/arch/vax/rtld_start.S                1.24
-       add a missing register prefix.
+       Rework so that the ctzsi builtin is supported.
+       VAX does need __clzsi2.
+       Add a missing register prefix.
        Add proper registers for register counts.
-
        [matt, ticket #37]
 
-sbin/ccdconfig/ccdconfig.c                     1.54
-sbin/ccdconfig/ccdconfig.c                     1.55
+sbin/ccdconfig/ccdconfig.c                     1.54-1.55
 sys/dev/ccd.c                                  1.152
 sys/dev/ccdvar.h                               1.34
 
@@ -271,22 +253,15 @@
        structures.
        Make kernel print device information when a ccd configured.
        Fix some typos in comments.
-       Don't print ccd_size with %zu; it no longer has type size_t.
-       Instead, cast to uintmax_t and print with %ju.
+       Use correct printf format when printing sizes.
        [sborrill, ticket #38]
 
-sys/rump/librump/rumpkern/hyperentropy.c       1.4
-sys/rump/librump/rumpkern/hyperentropy.c       1.5
-sys/rump/librump/rumpkern/hyperentropy.c       1.6
-sys/rump/librump/rumpkern/hyperentropy.c       1.7
+sys/rump/librump/rumpkern/hyperentropy.c       1.4-1.7
 
-       Call rnd_add_data asynchronously for the rump hyperentropy callback.
-
-       Avoids recursion rnd_getmore -> rnd_add_data -> rnd_getmore, which is
-       silly but I don't have time to fix it properly right now.
-
-       add sys/atomic.h and order headers correctly
-       Fix header ordering
+       Call rnd_add_data asynchronously for the rump hyperentropy callback. 
+       Avoids recursion rnd_getmore -> rnd_add_data -> rnd_getmore.
+       Add sys/atomic.h and order headers correctly.
+       Fix header ordering.
        <sys/param.h> comes first, per /usr/share/misc/style.
        [riastradh, ticket #35]