[src/trunk]: src/share/man/man4 "Each sensor dictionary" is a singular subjec...

[pgoyette <pgoyette%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/47c9f329a51e
branches:  trunk
changeset: 783898:47c9f329a51e
user:      pgoyette <pgoyette%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Sat Jan 12 03:16:43 2013 +0000

description:
"Each sensor dictionary" is a singular subject, so refer to "its"
characteristics, not "their" characteristics.

Also rephrase the device-properties section - device-properties is not
a sensor.

diffstat:

 share/man/man4/envsys.4 |  11 +++++------
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diffs (36 lines):

diff -r 8b67db72273d -r 47c9f329a51e share/man/man4/envsys.4
--- a/share/man/man4/envsys.4   Sat Jan 12 02:52:59 2013 +0000
+++ b/share/man/man4/envsys.4   Sat Jan 12 03:16:43 2013 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: envsys.4,v 1.49 2012/02/09 18:10:26 riz Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: envsys.4,v 1.50 2013/01/12 03:16:43 pgoyette Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 2007 The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
 .\" ARISING IN ANY WAY OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE
 .\" POSSIBILITY OF SUCH DAMAGE.
 .\"
-.Dd March 14, 2010
+.Dd January 10, 2013
 .Dt ENVSYS 4
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
@@ -78,14 +78,13 @@
 It will contain an array of dictionaries per device
 and one dictionary per sensor plus another special dictionary that
 contains the properties for a device.
-Each sensor dictionary will have their own characteristics and values.
+Each sensor dictionary will have its own characteristics and values.
 .Pp
 The following XML property list represents a virtual device
 .Dq device0
-with one sensor
+with one entry for sensor
 .Dq sensor0
-and all available properties set on it, plus another sensor for
-the
+and all available properties set on it, plus another entry for the
 .Dq device-properties
 dictionary (which contains specific properties for a device):
 .Pp