[src/pgoyette-localcount]: src/share/man/man9 Minor tweaks.

[pgoyette <pgoyette%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/7660fe7e9895
branches:  pgoyette-localcount
changeset: 852900:7660fe7e9895
user:      pgoyette <pgoyette%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Thu Dec 08 06:56:21 2016 +0000

description:
Minor tweaks.

diffstat:

 share/man/man9/localcount.9 |  12 +++++++-----
 1 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diffs (35 lines):

diff -r 2fc906dc618a -r 7660fe7e9895 share/man/man9/localcount.9
--- a/share/man/man9/localcount.9       Fri Nov 04 14:42:22 2016 +0000
+++ b/share/man/man9/localcount.9       Thu Dec 08 06:56:21 2016 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: localcount.9,v 1.1.2.6 2016/08/03 13:11:36 pgoyette Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: localcount.9,v 1.1.2.7 2016/12/08 06:56:21 pgoyette Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 2016
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
 .\" ARISING IN ANY WAY OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE
 .\" POSSIBILITY OF SUCH DAMAGE.
 .\"
-.Dd August 2, 2016
+.Dd December 8, 2016
 .Dt LOCALCOUNT 9
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
@@ -77,11 +77,13 @@
 .Pp
 As a rough heuristic,
 .Nm
-should be used for classes of objects of which there are maybe a few dozen
-instances but not a few thousand instances (e.g. autoconf devices, but not
+should be used for classes of objects of which there are perhaps a few dozen
+instances (such as
+.Xr autoconf 9
+devices) but not thousands of instances (such as
 network flows) and on which there may be a mixture of long-term I/O waits,
 such as xyzread for a device xyz(4), and short-term fast operations, such as
-xyzioctl(IOC_READ_A_CPU_REG).
+.Dv xyzioctl(IOC_READ_A_CPU_REG) .
 .Sh FUNCTIONS
 .Bl -tag -width abcd
 .It Fn localcount_init "lc"