[src/trunk]: src/share/man/man4 Improve wording.

[wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/9d3c7d10abdc
branches:  trunk
changeset: 967743:9d3c7d10abdc
user:      wiz <wiz%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Fri Dec 20 14:09:23 2019 +0000

description:
Improve wording.

diffstat:

 share/man/man4/ixl.4 |  9 +++++----
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diffs (20 lines):

diff -r fb19311a5366 -r 9d3c7d10abdc share/man/man4/ixl.4
--- a/share/man/man4/ixl.4      Fri Dec 20 12:02:46 2019 +0000
+++ b/share/man/man4/ixl.4      Fri Dec 20 14:09:23 2019 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: ixl.4,v 1.2 2019/12/20 02:24:02 yamaguchi Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: ixl.4,v 1.3 2019/12/20 14:09:23 wiz Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 2019 Internet Initiative Japan, Inc.
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -64,6 +64,7 @@
 by
 .An Shoichi Yamaguchi Aq Mt yamaguchi%NetBSD.org@localhost .
 .Sh BUGS
-VLAN hardware filter doesn't work while the interface is promiscuous mode.
-If a register of VLAN tag is failed due to lack of resources, the interface
-don't send and receive packets containing the tag.
+The VLAN hardware filter doesn't work while the interface is in
+promiscuous mode.
+If registering a VLAN tag fails due to lack of resources, the
+interface doesn't send and receive packets containing the tag.