[src/trunk]: src/distrib/notes PR 55413: 64-bit and OK police; grammar improv...

[martin <martin%NetBSD.org@localhost>]

details:   https://anonhg.NetBSD.org/src/rev/2bb558934029
branches:  trunk
changeset: 1021369:2bb558934029
user:      martin <martin%NetBSD.org@localhost>
date:      Fri May 28 13:55:24 2021 +0000

description:
PR 55413: 64-bit and OK police; grammar improvements.
>From Michael Siegel.

diffstat:

 distrib/notes/amd64/hardware |  4 ++--
 distrib/notes/common/sysinst |  8 ++++----
 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diffs (48 lines):

diff -r a281749e3efd -r 2bb558934029 distrib/notes/amd64/hardware
--- a/distrib/notes/amd64/hardware      Fri May 28 07:33:02 2021 +0000
+++ b/distrib/notes/amd64/hardware      Fri May 28 13:55:24 2021 +0000
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-.\"$NetBSD: hardware,v 1.1 2005/08/21 18:35:26 riz Exp $
+.\"$NetBSD: hardware,v 1.2 2021/05/28 13:55:24 martin Exp $
 .
 .Nx*M
-supports CPUs that implement the 64bit AMD64 architecture.
+supports CPUs that implement the 64-bit AMD64 architecture.
 These currently include AMD Opteron, AMD Athlon64, and Intel CPUs that 
 implement the EM64T extension.
diff -r a281749e3efd -r 2bb558934029 distrib/notes/common/sysinst
--- a/distrib/notes/common/sysinst      Fri May 28 07:33:02 2021 +0000
+++ b/distrib/notes/common/sysinst      Fri May 28 13:55:24 2021 +0000
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"    $NetBSD: sysinst,v 1.111 2021/05/27 15:47:42 martin Exp $
+.\"    $NetBSD: sysinst,v 1.112 2021/05/28 13:55:24 martin Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 1999-2012 The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -509,7 +509,7 @@
 When prompted, choose
 .Me CD-ROM
 as the install medium if booted from CD-ROM.
-The default values for the path and device should be ok.
+The default values for the path and device should be OK.
 .if \n[amd64]:\n[i386] \{\
 If you booted using a USB image, choose
 .Me Local directory .
@@ -745,7 +745,7 @@
 .Pp
 If you do not intend to use networking during the installation,
 but you do want your machine to be configured for networking once
-it is installed, you should first go to the
+the system is installed, you should first go to the
 .Me Utility menu
 and select the
 .Me Configure network
@@ -1287,7 +1287,7 @@
 to pick the operating system to start up when your computer
 is (re-)started.
 .Pp
-If everything is ok, you can go on to the next step,
+If everything is OK, you can go on to the next step,
 editing the
 .Nx
 disklabel.