Subject: Re: CVS commit: basesrc
To: Ben Harris <bjh21@netbsd.org>
From: Jun-ichiro itojun Hagino <itojun@iijlab.net>
List: source-changes
Date: 10/15/2000 20:44:13
>> >Render what text there is into something closer to English.
>> 	is it about s/ifmcstat/& utility/?
>Yes.  It should either have been "Ifmcstat dumps..." or "The ifmcstat
>utility dumps...", not "The Ifmcstat dumps".  I went for the longer
>version, since it avoids putting the name (which should really be
>all-lowercase) at the start of a sentence.  It's also the same phrasing as
>in many other manual pages.

	i believe there's some better way to express that than:
>> >Render what text there is into something closer to English.

	as a group of non-native English speakers, the above comment sounds
	a little bit discouraging.

itojun