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Re: Proofreader touchups to VAX INSTALL.more?
On Sat, Mar 23, 2024 at 09:34:02PM -0400, Mouse wrote:
> > support for the others included in source form. Please see
> > the NetBSD website: https://www.NetBSD.org/ for information
> > on them.
>
> I would argue the : after `website' should be removed.
That part is beyond my roff fu - it looks nice in the html output
and is hard to rephrase to make both versions optimal.
> > If you wish to install the sets from tape then stage you
> > will need to download the *.tgz files from
>
> This seems a bit incoherent to me. It appears to be using "stage" as a
> verb, but it is not at all clear to me what it means by it. None of
> the verb meanings of "stage" I'm familiar with match the context.
It was copy&pasted and the "stage" was a left over from a
"second stage bootloader". I just removed the stray "stage".
All other applied to -current, will request pullup.
Thanks!
Martin
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