On Fri, Mar 02, 2007 at 11:16:15AM -0600, Jeremy C. Reed wrote:
> Okay, I see it is new. Will need to be pulled up to other releases so our 
> webpage documentation is correct.

Let's finish the rewording first :)

> The "Nx" doesn't render with mandoc for me. So I get:

Fixed, thanks. I was convinced it would be rendered, so
I didn't even check :|

> It looks fine. Maybe mention binary packages too:

I added that part too, thanks.

> Attached is a manpage I think written by Jason White and myself and maybe 
> others from about one year ago. Maybe some parts of it can or should be 
> used.

This looks mostly good, and it's general enough that I don't think
it would be better suited for the pkgsrc guide.
Please incorporate it in pkgsrc(7) as you see fit.

> .Sh SEE ALSO
> .Xr pkg_add 1 ,
> .Xr pkg_admin 1 ,
> .Xr pkg_create 1 ,
> .Xr pkg_delete 1 ,
> .Xr pkg_info 1 ,
> .Xr pkg_view 1 ,

I'd avoid mentioning pkg_admin and pkg_create, since they are not
intended for the casual user.

> .Xr mk.conf 5 ,

Perhaps reference pkgsrc/mk/defaults/mk.conf instead?

> .Xr packages 7

And get rid of that, of course :)

Rest looks good.

Thanks!
 Thomas