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Re: Please review last nits I'm sending to the RFC Editor
Chris Lonvick writes:
> I'm planning on sending these requests to the RFC Editor. Please let me
> know if you'd suggest any changes.
Another trivia review:
> ===
> RFC 4253 [SSH-TRANS]
[...]
> 4)
> Section 5.2, fifth paragraph
> - change a word
> OLD:
> Implementations are expected to have some limit on the ssh transport
> ^^^
> NEW:
> Implementations are expected to have some limit on the SSH transport
> ^^^
This edit is in the wrong section; it should be against RFC 4254
[SSH-CONNECT].
> 5)
> Section 8, second paragraph with associated bullets
> - replace the paragraph and associated bullets
> - do not break the bulleted sections across page boundaries
[...]
> NEW:
[...]
> (K_S || f|| s) to C. The signing operation may involve a
^^
Missing space.
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