Re: proofreading pkgsrc flyers

To: regional-de%netbsd.org@localhost, pkgsrc-users%netbsd.org@localhost
Subject: Re: proofreading pkgsrc flyers
From: Roland Illig <rillig%NetBSD.org@localhost>
Date: Tue, 20 Feb 2007 23:54:17 +0100

Zafer Aydogan wrote:

auf der zweiten Seite:

- "Eine Datei sie alle zu knechten..."
+ "Eine Datei um sie alle zu knechten..."
es fehlt "um", abgesehen davon ist die Wortwahl miserabel.


[ ] You know the Lord of the Rings.

But I would add a comma after the "Datei" as well.

Roland

References:
- proofreading pkgsrc flyers
  - From: Stefan 'Kaishakunin' Schumacher
- Re: proofreading pkgsrc flyers
  - From: Stefan 'Kaishakunin' Schumacher
- Re: proofreading pkgsrc flyers
  - From: Zafer Aydogan

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