der Mouse wrote:
Lines 242-244: The version packet, as well as all requests and responses described in Section 3 are a description of the 'name' field and the data part of the packet. s/3/3,/
Done.
Line 304: SHOULD be sent. Note that normally, status messages are only sent by s/only sent by/sent by only/
I've not done this one - the result struck me as more awkward than what we have. Instead, I've made it "Note that normally, status messages are only sent by the server (in response to requests from the client)." I presume this achieves the clarification you were after...
Line 367: SSH_PUBLICKEY_ACCESS_DENIED s/$/./
Done.
find it as clear as I do; you might want to reword it. Suggestion: SSH_PUBLICKEY_ATTRIBUTE_NOT_SUPPORTED. For the purposes of a mandatory attribute, mere storage of the attribute is not sufficient; the server must understand and implement the intent of the attribute.
I've gone with:"For the purposes of a mandatory attribute, mere storage of the attribute is not sufficient -- rather, the server must understand and implement the intent of the attribute."
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